This fantastic piece of story writing was done by Marwa in response to a class writing challenge this week. I loved the way she used her descriptive writing skills and used her words to give the reader an image of what her teddy looked like in real life.
Just to give an update the whole class has earned themselves 211 points to be converted into house points when we get back to school.
Great work Marwa. Lovely tidy writing, with good word spacing and well done desribing what your teddy looks like. Is your teddy bear your favorite toy? From your descriptionI can understand why.
ReplyDelete211 points! Well done Room 4 for all your effort.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you do to earn those points?
Hello Room 4,
ReplyDeleteI cannot believe just how many points you’re all earned together as a class this lockdown already! Two hundred and eleven is a massive amount of points, you must all have been super busy with your distance learning.
Marwa your story about your red teddy bear is beautiful, he is a lucky bear to have an owner like you.
Keep up the great sharing!